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Zombies Next Door

Started by bingo_gasstation, August 04, 2008, 11:05:10 PM

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A short audio trailer a friend and I did for a fake BBC4 documentary. It's the first time I've done anything like this, and we're both pretty new to actually creating comedy instead of devouring it, so any feedback on what works/doesn't would be appreciated (a post proclaiming none of it works would just be downright spiteful, though)


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Danger Man

I liked the 'you heard me' bit but it took me a few seconds to work out what 'can you keep between the lines' meant...but maybe that's just me.

And I thought the piano was a little too intrusive but, overall, the sketch had potential.



Everyone's a critic, eh?

Cheers, Danger Man.

I thought the piano seemed a bit ramped up after uploading to Youtube, but not so much to be distracting.

Ginyard

Quote from: bingo_gasstation on August 05, 2008, 10:44:29 AM

I thought the piano seemed a bit ramped up after uploading to Youtube, but not so much to be distracting.

Its probably because it was stereo in the mix and its been summed to mono. Good first go though. Keep going.

Cheers, Ginyard. Didn't know youtube titted about with the sound like that, now I know!